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August 2017

Huzundar by Alkh


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Name: Huzundar 

World: Starcraft

Story

When the UED(United Earth Directorate) were sent fleeing from the Koprulu sector by the vicious pursuit of Kerrigan’s zerg forces, they left behind secret bases and laboratories, scattered on obscure planets and moons. With the main force annihilated, these isolated bases, cut off from all contact with earth, alone in the darkness of space, realized that in order to survive, they would need to be prepared for any inevitable situation. Thus, they developed techs unheard of before, out of sheer desperation. Anything that fell on their secluded planets, whether a displaced protoss vessel, a zerg corpse, or even a dominion ship, was studied, scavenged and incorporated into a grand design of surveillance and observation. And all this was the means, by which an unfortunate Dark Templar, the sullen Huzundar, became prisoner to the schemes of these terrans, an instrument of their surveillance, and a prisoner of a robotic shell that his essence was bound to.

 

Now during the second war, the protoss Dark Tempar of the planet Shakuras, developed the Stalker weapons, cybernetic walkers that rather than being piloted or having an AI, required a Templar to permanently infuse his own life essence into the machine. The Stalker thus being a fusion of life and machine, could utilize Templar’s psionic power, in order to teleport and attack with void blasts. Huzundar was one of the volunteers, who sacrificed themselves, even though beforehand he did not find it to his liking to abandon his true living body for a cybernetic one, he was nevertheless proud of this sacrifice, and considered such acts as both an honor and necessity for the protection of his people.

 

But in a horrific battle with a zerg force, on a mineral-rich moon of an un-documented planet, he was stricken down, his husk could not be rescued, he was left stranded. Still bound to the broken cyborg shell, Huzundar’s essence did not die when the body went offline, rather he was forced to endure this hopeless isolation for what seemed like an eternity. He was finally picked up by the scavengers of the secret UED base, and this was not the end of his pain. The scientists of the UED were delighted to experiment with protoss tech, and even more so when they realized that a living protoss was somehow fused into the machine.

They picked and prodded at the design, intent on finding the locus that connected the living consciousness of the templar, and the cybernetic frame, for with this knowledge they could modify the design to their liking. After years, they remodeled Huzundar, and installed a virtual brain system that subjugated the intent of his consciousness, a soul cage. They then let Huzundar loose, for he was their slave, with an agile neo-steel frame, DT cloaking, psionic shields and short range teleportation, he was their eye, travelling across the stars, undetected by many. But can a digital brain and a metal frame truly contain a soul, a question remains to be answered.


Check out more of Alkh’s work on Tapas Media.

Sereg Tauron by HawkHunting


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Name: Sereg Tauron

World:  Lord of the Rings

Story

In the First Age of Middle Earth, during the Fifth Battle against Morgoth, fought Hulyas member of the house of Dor-Iómin. He was on horseback at the forefront when Glaurung the Father of Dragons was unleashed. No match was Hulyas and his brothers in arms. One after another fell to the devastating force of a dragon. Then, Glaurung’s talon went down on Hulyas. Red turned his vision, and he lost consciousness. The dragon missed its target, but left a deep wound on the warrior. Presuming him dead, Glaurung went on killing the forces against Morgoth. Hulyas’ horse fled the battlefield into the safety of nearby woods.
Hulyas awoke in the middle of the forest, bereft of all sense of time. The loss of blood made his body limp. Soon after, he lost consciousness again.
As fate would have it, Hulyas’ life would be saved by an elf named Kemendil.
Hulyas awoke on a bed made out of leaves and twigs, in a hut not larger than a two-man tent.
“Mára arin. Good morning, Sereg Tauron”, was Hulyas greeted by his saviour.
“Sereg Tauron?”, asked Hulyas, his thoughts still on the battlefield.
“That is how we called you, since you weren’t available for an answer and your horse insisted on being secretive about it.”
Hulyas could hear a neigh from outside the hut.
“A month ago, a horse covered in blood came to our settlement. It led us to a man, in battle-worn armor, on death’s door.
Sereg Tauron. It means Blood Forester in your tongue. The soil was soaked in your blood.”
“You have my thanks, …”, Hulyas paused, not knowing the name of his host.
“Kemendil”, offered the elf with a smile.
Only now noticed Hulyas the pain on his left side. Under the bandages, the dragon’s nearly fatal wound throbbed.
Kemendil instructed him how to treat his wound and invited him to stay for as long as he wanted. Hulyas stayed for his remaining days in the settlement. The wound healed but left a scar down his chest. The elves asked him for his name, but he was fine with them calling him Sereg Tauron.


Check out more of Hawk’s work on Tapas Media and twitter.  

Ramon Baldo by David Alanis


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Name: Ramon Baldo

World: RWBY

Weapons name: Gone/ Correct (Duals Batons/magnums)

Semblance: Concentration (he can increase the capacities of one sense as long as he concentrates (for example he can concentrate his eyes to watch better or concentrate his hearing to hear from other places))

Story

Is a student from Beacon Academy a year younger form RWBY class, In a Young age he realize that If it was not for the grimms people would have kill themselves ,so he decide to become a huntsman to fight corruption and destroys ideas that hurt other people. However everyone thinks that his dream is silly because they live in a utopia and there wasn´t corruption on the news so if was pointless. After that he scream of frustration in a remote part but then yang finds him by mistake and give him a napkin because she thinks he cries and tell him to not give up and believe in his own dream because, she thinks he´s dream is cool and after that she leaves and Ramon thinks she is so cool and wants to become cool as her because he wants to help people as she did to him and later he start to watch a lot of movies to reference cool protagonist and he was so focused and determined to be as cool as yang that accidently manifest his semblance, later he trains to uses his semblance better and to train physically and mentally himself and when school begins he was different and his sees himself as a cool guy . In classroom he acts cool, mysterious and who knows the answers, but when no one is watching is a passionate guy who loves inventing, trains himself hard and learning new things.  The only persons who know about this, are his teammates. But when another person is hurting an innocent he gets mad and start to fight the person who made the injustice until the other is unconscious fortunately he can get unfocused if someone disrupt him. After the events of season 3 he gets angry after what happened to Yang and decide to destroy the white fang and his team goes with him to once for all end the criminal organization and see if he can finally be cool in Yangs eyes and especially in himself.


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